From :  Alex Barret <alex_barret@hotmail.com> 
Sent :  Wednesday, 10 March 2004 7:31:15 AM 
To :  GWDeathcythe@hotmail.com 
Subject :  Fanfic "Chimaera" 
  

 
 
Your Gundam Wing work "Chimaera" is really nice and has a good idea as basis material but obviously you failed to mention that you have a model which helps you to get along: 
Sunhawks works "The Ion Arc" or "The Road Trip Arc". 
There is too much evidence in your fic to ignore that you probably had a schematic description of an other theory or fanfiction that accounts for its known properties and was used for further study of its characteristics/characters. 
I dont think its plagiarsm yet, and i wont (and dont have the time to) prove this, but it would be great if people can take note that theyre getting some ideas from somewhere else. 

Alex 

Btw. Im not the only one, who recognized similar/resembling parts. 
And you should try to vary your writing style, e.g. almost every new paragraph begins with "Duo did this... Heero did that..."... gets kinda... boring/lame. 
Sorry, constructive criticism 
 
